I haven't made it through one video that I've tried yet do to it. Hearing him, or any guy, talk and grunt isn't sex to me. I want to hear her. Especially in a daddy talk video.
I think part of the problem is the way he has his scenes miked. It's like he's only using the camera that's he's holding's mic and doesn't have one on her. It makes him too present with her in the distance. I bet it would make a huge difference if he changed that up.